How Am I Supposed To Believe In Love - Chapter 1: Poison
"Thou,
the most precious things. Ye shall cover the truth and lead our way. Shall I
compare thee to a star in the sky? Thou art beautiful and set me free. Thou beest
magnificent. Thou dost good but have to be found. What hast thou? Thou hast my faith. Thou art
mine. Thou beest love."
Chapter 1 : Poison
It was a rainy day when the wind
was blowing through his heart before he had realized who she was. She was the
last and would be the only one. When he said that he loved her, he meant it
from the bottom of his heart. He was sure that it was love.
“jij bent van mij”, Zavian said.
“ik ben de jouwe”, Kimmy replied.
They walked hand in hand. They were
saying that they would love each other forever. Day by day, they went
together wherever the wind led them. Zavian was very confident about their
relationship. Unfortunately, Kimmy did not think the same because Kimmy was not
really looking for it.
Zavian was an Indonesian man who
was living in Netherlands. He has dated with Kimmy, a beautiful blonde girl,
which made Zavian’s life has completed. It supposed to be a happy story because
their stories and memories were too many. Suddenly, his phone got buzzed by his
friend. It was an urgent message which was said that Zavian had to go to mall and
it was about Kimmy. The question is: What happened to Kimmy?
He ran, he jumped out from where he
sat. He went to the mall as soon as possible because he thought that Kimmy was
in danger. Few minutes later, he arrived and then he met his friend. However, his
friend did not say anything after he had arrived.
“Tell me what is going on!”
“You should not come here. I am not
sure that you will be happy because of it.”
“Just tell me where she is!”
“She is there.”
Zavian turned his eyes and he saw
Kimmy, the girl who sat with another guy and cuddling each other in the café.
He had been forced to see what he did not want to see. In fact, that was the
reality. Kimmy, was not a loyal girl.
“You should not go with a blonde girl,
Zavian. I get informed that most of them are not the loyal one.”
“Don’t you dare to say it again,
Kimmy is different!”
“Well, just take a look at her.
Your loyal Kimmy. You should not believe anyone easily, Zavian!”
Then, Zavian left the mall. He lost
something which was called love. Zavian has no idea what to do. Therefore,
Zavian chose to go away from anyone. He wanted to go somewhere, at a place where
people might not see him because he wanted to be alone.
At the
strange place. Zavian broke down in tears.
“Say you'll remember me
Standing in a nice dress,
Staring at the sunset, babe
Red lips and rosy cheeks
Say you'll see me again
Even if it's just in your
Wildest dreams, ah-ha. It is your favorite song, isn’t it?”
After he had made up his mind.
Zavian planed to go to his hometown, Indonesia. He has lost everything, he
thought. He decided to forget his past, his memories and his beloved one. The
day after, everything was ready. He has prepared things to be brought. As he
left the door, he remembered everything about her. Suddenly, he said:
“I pick my poison and it is you. Nothing can kill me like you do!”
Bonus Trailer: It supposed to be memento of our PKL but..
Very interesting *standingovation*. I can't wait for the coming chapter.
BalasHapushaha wow.. a love story eh ? i can see it is going to be a nice one. A story about a couple who have a different culture. You are using a nice vocabulary, but unfortunately you made minor mistakes such as in the sentence " dated with kimmy " i think you did not have to add " with " there. Overall, awesome story :)
BalasHapusIt's very interesting story . i think your story is good and i don't have anything to say to comment about grammar .
BalasHapusInteresting Story. I can not wait for the next part. Maybe you made some mistakes but overall, you have a good grammar and punctuation.
BalasHapus